Chapter 7

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Chapter 7

Fo2ad's Side

Omg who is sheeee, i managed to stay up the whole night with her and not get bored??? '3areeba it's not like me!! She's beautiful, funny, humorous, and theres something about her!! It's not describable; I don’t even think it has a word!! But I loved it, it attracted me to her, it's like for once, someone can control me, is this what love feels like? Cause I have no idea at this point!
at about 7:00 am we went to sleep

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Something was disturbing my dreams, I couldn’t see what was rushing through my head because something was disturbing it, and then I realized I was already awake because of the sounds, I managed to open my eyes, and found Layan all dressed and making the bed, even in the morning she's still beautiful :')

Me: La..yaan

Layan: 9baa7 el 5air, sorry ga3adtk??

Me: 9ba7 el noor, laa its fine, sa3a cham??

Layan: almost 11:00

Me: oooh t2a5arnaa

Layan: eee

Me: enzain why are you making the bed?? You don’t have to

Layan: adryy, I like too

Me: uummm, okaaay, hhahahaha awal mara achoof bnayaa mthlch el 9ara7a

Layan: heeey la t'97aak okay, wallaa a7ib, I ruined the bed, I fix it

Me: okay then, I'll fix my bed too

Layan: hehehe, eee a7saan

I got up, washed my face and packed the bed they got me, just to make her happy, and impressed :$ We checked out of the hospital and I walked her back home

Layan: *exhaling in fear* bismellaa, thanxx fo2ad, thanx alot for everything

Me: anytime layan, and please don’t thank me, masawait shay, umm can I have your number 3ashan man'9ay3 ba3a'9

Layan: uummm, yeaa okay 333*****

Me: okay thanx, good luck

Layan: ( I could see the fear in her eyes) thanx

Me: layan if they do anything to you, I'll always be in the m7arag park, come right to me and just leave the rest to me, pleeaseee okay

Layan: thanx fo2ad, but I can take care of myself

Me: choof el 3naaaad!! Layaan, just listen okay, they do anything, you know where to find mee

Layan: hhhhh thanxx anyways

Me: anytime

Layan: byee

Me: byee

And I watched her enter the old rusted building slowly, and in fear

Layan's side

I enetered the flat, hoping that they weren't home, but unfortunately, they where both sitting on the t.v

Me: el salam 3alaikm

5azoony 5aaaaz

Fatin: wein knty

Me: el dctora ma galatlch??

Fatin: mbala galatly, bs 3an el chatheb w gooleelna wein kntay

Me: (what the heeelll is her problem??) knt fl mstashfa

Fatin: akeed??

Me: ee akeed (shfeeha thyy yanaat??) w el dctoraa called you ba3ad 3ashan t9adgeeny

Ja3far: 5air shkan feech

Me: 9arly mental breakdown

Ja3far: shnow thyy metha..thaal  bra..rak doon

KNT BAMOOOOTT ABYY A'97AAAK!!

Me: ya3ny …(I paused to hold in my laugh) ya3ny ga3at at5ayal el ryayeel ely thb7aw ahly w 5arabaw 7ayaty

Ja3far: ga3adtyy tt5ayaleen mthl el jahal ya3nyy wahahhaha

Me: laa ma ga3at at5ayal mthl el YAHAL, 9arly mental break down el shy mb f yadyy

Fatin: enteen wala mara glteenla g9atch

Me: ee la2na ma7ib at'thakar, w wala mara s2altoony

Fatin: 3ajal t3alay g3day gooleelna

Haa?? Shfeehaa thyy m8arera tt3a6af wyay el youm :s

Me: umm okay

R7t w ga3at yamha

Fatin: yalla, bs mabyy tfa9eeeel, bs mla5aa9

Me: nshalla, knt rada mn el bait w ma7a9alt a7ad (my throught started clogging up, what happens everytime I say the story) r7t foog, w sma3t ahly y9ar5oon, n5ashait ta7t el sreer, w ahly dashaw el 7jra ely knt mn5asha fee w wyahm thnaina ryayeel w kanaw ys2loon 3any, la2na kan 3ndy mfta7 yaboona

Fatin: w enteen shla 3ndch el mfta7

Me: chfta 3al ar'9 w ana amshy, kan m3alag 3ala snslaa, w knt yahel ma knt adry ena may9eer, fa shlta wyay w 5atheta, bs ba3dain 6a7 mn yady w dash sewage hole

Ja3far: enzain enzain kamlaay

Weeeh!! Sh9ayer fl dnyaa, ga3deen yt3a6afoon laaishh?!? Shyaboon mny??

Me: enzain fa ahly galoolhm ena mayadroon ana wein, w…(I took a deep breath and swallowed the clog) w thb7aaw obooy, w ra9a, (tears rolled down my cheeks) ra9a, rolled 3ndy ta7t el sreer (the witch gasped in horror) ba3dain galaw bthb7oon omy a'9n, w magdrt a5aleehm ythb7oonha w 6l3t mn el sreer, w gltlhm ena madry wein el mfta7, thb7aw ahly wa7d (I was crying my eyes out by now, and my voice was almost too cracky to be understood) wa7d jdam 3yoony, taamaiit a7lff ena ma3ndy el mftaaa7… bs mthl el 3ada, ma7ad y9adegny (na'3zaa ya3ny fhmoohaa yal 7ameer) w '3ta9boony ba3dain yaw el shr6aa w ---

Fatin: '3TAA9BOOOCH?!?!?

Me: eee (wiping my tears away

Fatin: wa3alyaaa

I looked at they're eyes, and found a sort of guilt, and sympathy, maybe they'll show me a little more respect now !!

I got up, and went to my jail sobbing and crying, they just had to remind me?!?! I could hear them talk, so I stuck my ear next to the filthy door and listend

Fatin: walla 6l3at mskeena hal bnayaa

Ja3far: ee wallaa, chna '9alamnahaa

Fatin: ee

YEEESS!! OMGG YFHMOOONN EL7EEEEN!! OMGG I SHOULD HAVE TOLD THEM MY STORY AGESS AGGOOO!! But this still doesn’t take away the pain, it still doesn’t make me forgive them for every single thing they've done to me!! i decided to take a shower and then go get some more money since im bored, so I did, and used some of the hair products I got, then I put on a half-sleeved t-shirt, and 3-quarter pants, since it’s a hot day, took my guitar, and left…I thought of a few places to go, and decided to go to m7arag park, since I might see fo2ad :$ I took my bicycle, and drove off too m7arag, the sun was burning my flesh, but still the wind helped cooled me down, and blowed my hair away from my face, and fanned me, it's a weird day…anyways, I locked my bike against a pole, got down, and picked a spot under the trees, which was were the couples filled the place, away from the children's playing area, I decided to play a thousand years, by Christina perri ft steve kazee

'The day  …  we  ….  Met

Frozen, I held my breath

Right from the start

I knew it I found a home for my…

Heart..beats…fast

Colors and promises

How to be brave? How can I love..

When im afraid, to, fall

…….

All the couples gathered around me, with there hands around eachother, they all looked sooo cutee!! When I finished the song, they clapped for me, and threw me some money, when I was getting up for my next stop, a guy, one of the couples came up to me

Guy: heey, I'm fahad

Me: hi fahad, ana layan

Fahad: ooh ttkalamen 3araby??

Me: hehehe eee

Fahad: hhh, enzain can I give you a song to sing, as a dedication, im going to propose in a few seconds, and your voice will make it more special

His eyes should how much love he had towards the lady he kept looking at while talking to me, this never happened before, I mean a dedication, but I loved the idea :D

Me: ee ofcourssee!! I'll be glad to sing for you, which song??

Fahad: thanks aloot, do you know the power of love?  By celine dion… I know its old, but its our song

Me: one of my favourite song!! Perfect!

Fahad: hhh good, yalla, when I sit down, just count to five and come

Me: okay suree

I watched were he was going, and then he sat next to a beautiful lady , they looked so cute together

1    2      3        4     5

I took my guitar and went next to them

Me: excuse mee everyone can I have your attention pleaseee!! *everyone looked at me* Fahad, asked for a dedication for his beautiful girlfriend *I didn’t wana say fiancée 3ashan ma5arb 3alai* *I lowered next to them as in asking for her name, and he whispered Najd* for his beautiful girlfriend Najd, it's theyre song and I hope you all like it

She looked so shocked and happy, wallaaa 7aadhmm cutee, they cuddled up next to eachother, and I started singing

The whispers in the morning

Of lover sleeping tight

And rolling like thunder now

As I looked into your eyes

I hold on to your body

And feel each mooove you make

Your voice Is warm and tender

A love that I can not forsake

CAUSEE IM YOUUR LAADYYY

And you are myy maaaan

Whenever you reach for me

Ill do all that I caaaaan

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To be continued